Working on a New Novel – PETER3D OUT

For the last few weeks, I have been working on a new novel called PETER3D OUT.  Its a mystery in a cyberpunk future

I’ve been thinking over the premise and plot for several months and now I’m writing this puppy up. 

Its going to be published in a very raw, rough draft at http://peter3dout.com .

I don’t have the registration set up yet, but basically anyone that registers (free) can read the book for free and ask questions, edit/proof/ or even piss all over it if you like.

Looking for all levels of critique, but I prefer the constructive types of criticism if I can get it.  If not I will settle for the venom that makes me stronger.